My Modern Take on Rumi – Feedback Welcome!
2024.11.29 15:28 Putrid-Flounder3420 My Modern Take on Rumi – Feedback Welcome!
Hi everyone! 🌟
I've been working on a poem inspired by the timeless beauty of Rumi’s works. My aim was to modernize the themes while maintaining the spiritual and emotional depth his poetry is known for.
“© [Aria atashi] [11/29/2024]. All rights reserved. If shared, please credit the author as [Aria Atashi].”
Here’s the piece:
Moses and the Shepherd
“Saw moses a shepherd lost on the way, Crying, "Oh Lord, O holy God…, I pray!”
"Where are you, that I can serve your will? I yearn to mend your shoes, and to comb Your hair still”
"To kiss your palms, to soothe Your weary feet, to set your bed when nightfall takes the seat.”
“For You, I offer all my goats and herd, in each breath, Your name is all that’s ever heard.
"O Holy God, I offer my life to you, My children, wealth, all things I hold true”
"Should sickness claim You, Lord, I'll be Thee guard,
Soothing Your pain, a faithful, watchful ward"
“Moses, aghast, exclaimed, "Have you lost your mind? Your devotion leads you where truth is hard to find. ”
“What nonsense is this? What heresy, I say! -
Now bite Thee tongue, and turn away!”
"Shoes and straps may suit your humble feet, But try to bound the sun by the mere sheet?"
“should you not quench this word's fiery claim, The world engulfs an everlasting flame!”
"Poor shepherd wept with the aching might, that you, Moses, sewed the lips, yet burned The soul with regret and fright."
"He tore The robe, and a sigh escaped The chest, Then vanished into deserts, the soul much oppressed."
"A word came to Moses from The Divine: You drawn Our servant’s heart away out of the mine.'"
" You came to bind and bring the hearts near, Not to sunder by strafing and fear."
"We care not for the outward show or plea, But seek the heart, where truth runs so free!"
"Nation of love stands apart from the other faiths, For lovers are true believers in God's grace."
"if the gem has no seals , it’s no loss, as love bear no fears in sorrow’s toss."
"When Moses heard this reprimand of the Divine,
He rushed into desert, searching the shepherd's sign."
Last he found the shepherd lost in plight, said, "Rejoice! some news has come to light"
"He lifted the lost soul with a holy hand, then blew away the desert's barren sand."
"Heavy with the weight of his hasty thorn, Moses locked eyes with broken forlorn."
" no rites ,no rules of such you need to acquire, say the best that deep down you desire!”
feedbacks i provided links: https://www.reddit.com/OCPoetry/comments/1h2mu1d/splinters/ https://www.reddit.com/OCPoetry/comments/1h2ki3o/traveling_in_africa/
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