WIP Readers Wanted - Sports/Workplace/Second Chance Omegaverse
2024.11.26 23:40 Finely_Feathered868 WIP Readers Wanted - Sports/Workplace/Second Chance Omegaverse
Hi! Want to help an aspiring why-choose wordsmith out?
I'm looking for a few beta readers to provide feedback on the polished but not final draft of the first book in a contemporary Omegaverse trilogy. In addition to feedback about the usual (plot, characters, etc.), I would like input on the level of medical jargon/technical terms in the book and sensitivity issues related to the depiction of chronic illness. Given the plot's density and the planned scope of the books, I would love feedback from fellow RH fans at this relatively early stage on the path to eventual publication.
Overview: FMC, an omega and former Olympic gymnast, struggles to rebuild her life after a career-ending accident, leaving her with lasting injuries, including the loss of her sense of smell. While navigating the challenges of her sports medicine fellowship and a make-or-break research project, FMC must confront her past, her feelings for the men who threaten her control, and the expectations of a world obsessed with pheromones.
- MMC1, a retired elite alpha gymnast, her almost-boyfriend from a decade ago, and her new work colleague.
- MMC2, the brilliant, supportive alpha pheromone scientist and former college football star with a penchant for sweaters.
- MMC3 (mated to MMC4), the sweet beta photographer with a massive crush on FMC and even bigger insecurities about his past.
- MMC4 (mated to MMC3), the rakish alpha lighting designer who would be a better fit for a rock concert than his actual employer, the ballet, and who strives to get his mate whatever he wants, including FMC.
- MMC5, a steely alpha bioengineering executive with dominance for days, who doesn't understand the other men's desire to mix business with pleasure.
Happy to answer any questions you may have. (If this isn't allowed here, I'm sorry.)
Thanks!
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