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2024.11.28 20:00 OkWatercress5714 LEGENDA X MURDERDRONES
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2024.11.28 20:00 FilipeMiguelescritor A vida sem ti é um castigo
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2024.11.28 20:00 Kawsar_Khan 002 Al Baqarah || क़ुरान का हिंदी में अनुवाद | quran translation in hindi
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2024.11.28 20:00 Last-Bunch4498 Welp… what do you guys think lol
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2024.11.28 20:00 adulting4kids Revisions
Step 5- Revisions
- Overall Coherence:
- Does the narrative flow smoothly, maintaining a clear and logical progression from scene to scene?
- Are there any inconsistencies or gaps in the plot that need addressing?
- Character Consistency:
- Have character motivations, behaviors, and dialogue remained consistent throughout the story?
- Are there any instances where characters deviate from their established traits without justification?
- Pacing and Rhythm:
- How is the pacing of the story overall? Is there a balance between moments of tension and moments of respite?
- Are there scenes or chapters that feel rushed or linger too long?
- Dialogue Effectiveness:
- Does the dialogue serve its purpose in conveying information, characterizing individuals, and advancing the plot?
- Is the dialogue natural and authentic, reflecting the unique voices of each character?
- Descriptive Language:
- Is the descriptive language vivid and evocative, creating a strong sense of place and atmosphere?
- Are there opportunities to enhance imagery and sensory details to immerse the reader further?
- Foreshadowing Payoff:
- Have the earlier elements of foreshadowing been satisfactorily resolved or addressed later in the story?
- Is there a balance between subtlety and clarity in the use of foreshadowing?
- Character Arc Resonance:
- Do character arcs demonstrate growth, change, or resolution in a way that is emotionally resonant?
- Have characters' experiences throughout the story had a meaningful impact on their development?
- Plot Subplots Integration:
- Are subplots seamlessly integrated into the main narrative, enhancing rather than distracting from the central story?
- Do subplots contribute to character development and thematic exploration?
- Tension and Release:
- How is tension built and released throughout the story? Are there effective peaks and valleys in the narrative?
- Do climactic moments have the desired impact on the reader?
- Themes and Messages Reinforcement:
- Are the central themes and messages of the story consistently reinforced? - Do character actions, plot events, and symbolic elements align with the intended themes? - Reader Engagement:
- Is the story likely to engage and captivate the intended audience? - Have you considered beta reader feedback or external perspectives on reader engagement? - Setting Significance:
- Does the setting play a significant role in the story, impacting both plot and character dynamics? - Is there an opportunity to further explore or emphasize the importance of specific settings? - Transitions and Flow:
- How are transitions between scenes and chapters handled? Is there a smooth and natural flow? - Are there opportunities for stronger connections or hooks between different parts of the story? - Tightening Language:
- Can sentences and paragraphs be tightened for conciseness and clarity? - Are there instances of redundant language that can be streamlined? - Balance of Elements:
- Is there a balance between action, dialogue, and introspection in the narrative? - Are there areas where certain elements could be emphasized or toned down for better balance? - Addressing Feedback:
- Have you considered and incorporated constructive feedback received during earlier drafts or beta reading? - Are there consistent issues or patterns raised in feedback that require attention? - Symbolic Consistency:
- Are symbolic elements or motifs consistently woven throughout the story? - Do these symbols maintain their relevance and impact, or do they require adjustment? - Emotional Impact:
- Does the story evoke the intended emotional responses from readers? - Are there specific scenes or moments where emotional impact can be heightened? - Checking for Redundancy:
- Are there scenes, descriptions, or character traits that duplicate each other? - Can redundant elements be removed or consolidated to streamline the narrative? - Final Readability Check:
- Conduct a final readability check. How does the story read as a whole? - Is it engaging, cohesive, and ready for the intended audience? submitted by adulting4kids to writingthruit [link] [comments]
2024.11.28 20:00 CTejidas PASO A PASO GRATIS de Llavero de Perrito a Crochet
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2024.11.28 20:00 drozdas molly
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2024.11.28 20:00 2015eaglesattack im a cumboy
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2024.11.28 20:00 Other-Ad-7945 Suranne Jones
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2024.11.28 20:00 Separate_Strategy840 Committee position
How much does it matter to be on one for my cv (final year)? Could I realistically lie about it and get away with it?
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2024.11.28 20:00 icesstriker Various Signups for Payment [US Only]
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| SoFi (Investment Account) | $25 worth of stock from them + $15 from me | Open a SoFi Active invest account and fund it with $25+ | You could have a SoFi Checking account. Message me the name you used to create the account for confirmation. |
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2024.11.28 20:00 BloxGamerBoi This happened on one of my livestreams like what
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2024.11.28 20:00 S_Keeper High Flying
Ice-skating ineffables for a patreon request!
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2024.11.28 20:00 WeWantMOAR Tucker Carlson Funded by Russian Propaganda Machine, Justin Trudeau Testifies Under Oath
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2024.11.28 20:00 CodingSimpleton Why is Terms of Service Important?
It's important to know what you are binding yourself towards legally. You are agreeing to everything state in exchange for the convenience of being able to use their services. Most people don't even read it & then are surprised to realize their information's being shared & sold.
There is software out there that will offer you the same convenience without selling your data & giving your private life up for the service. They are not going to pay for advertising that you might say oh I found this off a facebook ad. Word of mouth is how the better choices float around & if you didn't search for it you wouldn't know of it.
It's important to know what your giving up so take 10 minutes to read for your convenience!
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2024.11.28 20:00 JohnKLUE34567 Nux-A-Lore Suggestion: Kaiserreich
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2024.11.28 20:00 Horror_Refuse5965 Soundcore Life Q35 vs JBL Tune 770NC?
I am planning to buy one of these two as these seem to be the best options (I was looking for headphones under 100 dollars). Q35 is around 10 dollars more expensive where I live. q35 is around 83 dollars while JBL Tune 770NC is 71. I did check many other headphones through rankings and reviews but either they are not available or they are just way too overpriced here compared to other places. I did make another post here comparing q30 with ATH-M30x but then I thought I should get a decent wireless headphone for travels and later on I will get ATH-M50x or something around that. And yes, this will be my primary headphone for now.
USE CASE:
I do travel around from time to time and I would die if I don't listen to some music (While traveling I can listen to music for around 9-12 hours max depending on the travel). Though normally, I am not a heavy listener because I watch stuff (Lectures, YouTube and Series) or do gaming mostly so I don't get a lot of time to listen to music (maybe around 2-3 hrs max normally). Though I must say, I almost always use a headset for my keyboard because the speakers are trash but that might not be a problem for long as I might get a new keyboard (but still, playing while no one can listen to you is a HUGE benefit). I mostly listen to classical, folk, neo-folk, pop and rock (mostly soft rock).
MY OPINION
I am heavily confused because I saw in rtings that JBL has better sound quality which is more neutral and more accurate but q35 seems to have better frequency range. Also, I saw many reviews about q30 breaking due to plastic and design flow but I think that shouldn't exist in q35 because it is newer (hopefully they addressed the issue) and has a metal plate. Not to say 770NC itself is entirely plastic. Also, in most places I saw quality of mic is better in q35 but overall call experience is better in 770NC. These two are just so close in so many things and then I see few things where q35 is better and then few things where 770NC is better and it confuses me. Also the fact that 770NC doesn't offer a case so buying a separate case will brin its price on par with q35. Also, I would like to ask does q35 have auto-off feature (automatically turns of while inactive) because 770NC seems to have it but I am confused about q35.
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2024.11.28 20:00 Kyotei_ Hvordan finder man andre ofre?
Lidt anderledes post end hvad jeg normalt ser herinde, men jeg bliver nød til at vide nærmere.
Jeg står i den situation, at jeg kender nogle piger som tidligere har været udsat for overgreb og andre typer af vold, af samme fyr. Disse piger kendte ikke hinanden, før den ene tog kontakt til den anden ang. nævnte fyr, og ville høre den andens oplevelser. Der er snakke om flere års manipulation, psykisk vold og endda voldtægt. Alt muligt sygt. Det er ikke blevet anmeldt pga. frygt, samt at han har været god til at holde tingene væk fra skrift. Så opkald og scenarier i virkeligheden.
Derfor spørger jeg her, om det er muligt at finde et form for forum, hvor man kan lede efter andre ofre af manden, så der muligvis kan ske nogle konsekvenser for sådan et sygt individ. Jeg holder de dybere detaljer hemmeligt for ofrenes skyld, da de stadig er påvirket, men også ønsker at denne mand får den straf han fortjener. Derfor kunne det være fedt, at finde flere af hans mulige ofre, da den ene har været vidne til at han har snakke med flere piger på en gang, og da dette kunne være med til at bruges som dokumentation til en ordenlig anmeldelse.
Mvh Den bekymrede veninde
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2024.11.28 20:00 bladeNY I'M A FULL TIME FREELANCER HERE IS MY EMAIL ADDRESS
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2024.11.28 20:00 LePrinceTheo2013 Idea for the game + Details
Hello everyone, I have an idea for the game.
This is a message for Coffee Stain Studios:
Can you add a passenger car to Satisfactory to go FAR with friends or just to roleplay please.
Details:
it could hold 5 players per car
The cost of construction:
10 fabrics (for seats)
and the cost of a freight car.
Its for you to make the model and the texture.
Thanks for reading (I hope) Goodbye!
LePrinceTheo2013
A passionate French player.
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2024.11.28 20:00 3581_Tossit The Waze and Google Maps Irish voice navigation has disappeared
Has this happened to anyone else? I loved the Irish version and I don't want an English lady or an American telling me where to go.
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2024.11.28 20:00 Helostopper Snippet wings!
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2024.11.28 20:00 GasAdministrative306 Vtip
Idu 2 ja a stredny spadne
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2024.11.28 20:00 AdamantiteM Hover animation on tabs with the GTK Theme on brave
 | Hey! I use Linux (Arch) with Gnome (and GTK). GTK changes its accent color when I change wallpapers, and some weeks ago, the hover animation, which used to look good and clean (using the accent color) started looking like in this video: https://safe.classydev.f2024_11_28_20_47_37-tkHjy4e28ZCrwmeXPb6UhRWXq6qa48KS.mkv I have no idea what's the issue here, and I don't have any ideas on how to debug this, as anything else that uses GTK works fine, and I have no idea how the GTK theme works on brave. Can y'all help me out? I included a screenshot containing my PC specs. PC Specs Thanks in advance! submitted by AdamantiteM to brave_browser [link] [comments] |
2024.11.28 20:00 Then_Marionberry_259 Adrian Day: US$2,500 Gold? Pullback Would be "Healthy," Reasons to Buy Remain
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