Needing some feedback
2025.02.01 22:52 T-Rex1002 Needing some feedback
Hey everyone, first post here, looking to get feedback on this song I'm currently working on.
For the instrumental, how is the structure? The mix? Anything you'd add or subtract? (I do still have to record bass)
Lyrics (Not finished, but getting there)
Verse You caught me out of thin air So I gave in to your current We slipped between moments I found myself lost in you But it was just a fantasy
Chorus You were a storm inside a bottle And I would have sank with your tide Unraveling threads, too fine to hold What is this ???? I've come to know
Verse 2 Like the end of a dream I'm jolted awake Words are daggers And they're meant to hurt
Bridge (Spoken word) Your fragments like raindrops on a mirrors edge They scatter and dissolve like colors in a thread A river runs through you, wild and deep I'll wade through the currents to the secrets you keep
Thanks for reading/listening, I appreciate any feedback!
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I had a water pressure arrestor installed on our main water line about a year ago in the hope it would fix the issue, but it really didn't. The water pressure was definitely too high prior to that, but we have it set to about 58-60 now and those appliances still hammer like crazy. I kind of gave up for a while and moved on to other things, but I'm not worried about it again :)
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Yesterday the hiring mgr checked in w/me and stated that in order to move forward with the SQR, I will actually need to formally decline the TJO via email (and then provide documentation: pay stubs, transcripts, references...which is no problem and in which I hv full confidence), and told it will likely take 3-6 months to be accepted/denied. I'm wondering why the change from accept TJO and negotiate...to, I must decline in order to "negotiate"/ask for anything more(?) Seems strange, and I haven't been able to obtain any add'l info on this.
I'm under Schedule A authority, fwiw. Also, it was the hiring mgr who came across my resume somewhere and proactively reached out to me to consider this position. I agreed to interview; it went very well. And here we are. I come from private sector. Any insight re: the switch from "accept+negotiate", to decline an take my chances", or add'l questions I should be asking, or things to consider? Thank you.
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Last last two commutes over the same route it would do it occasionally, but I wasn't able to replicate it long enough to record it. Has anyone else seen this? I'm at 20K so I'd like to get it fixed before my warranty runs out, but since it doesn't seem re-creatable I don't want to drop it off at the dealer just for them to tell me SOL.
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This year, Iām aiming to get back into long-distance running, so itād be awesome to find someone who enjoys staying active or has similar fitness goals. Iām all about balanceābeing a dad is important to me, but I also love making time for a meaningful connection.
If youāre down for exploring the outdoors, chatting about anything under the sun, and sharing some laughs, feel free to message me! :)
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